Friday, November 18, 2011

Reading and writing / PET online practice

Writing part 2:

Roby,
     I am writing to tell thank you for came with me on a coach trip to London. As you bought my lunch, so I want to repay you with an invitation. do you want to have lunch with me tomorrow?

Regards
Dany.


Writing part 3:

My favourite film is "the notebook". This movie is about a love story. It is a romantic and interesting film because two young fought against people that did not want to see them together.
This story happened in 40'. Ann was a rich girl and Noa was a poor boy however, they fell in love when she was in holiday with her parents. Ann's parents were disagree with this love and for this reason, they decided to go out the village with Ann. Then they have waited seven years to meet again.
In contrast to story had another story of a man in an old people's home that every day told this story of Ann and Noa to an old woman with Alzheimer's disease.  As the film progressed we can notice that the old couple were Ann and Noa.

1 comment:

  1. Writing part 1:???
    Part 2: check prep/verb agreement, linking words, capital letters.
    Part 3: Sentence structure, punctuation, separation of sentences. Last paragraph is very hard to understand.

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